Dear editor,I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term的短文改错!Dear editor,I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term,my parents or teachers asked me to live in the school dormitory .They said it would be very convenient
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Dear editor,I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term的短文改错!Dear editor,I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term,my parents or teachers asked me to live in the school dormitory .They said it would be very convenient
Dear editor,I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term的短文改错!
Dear editor,
I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term,my parents or teachers asked me to live in the school dormitory .They said it would be very convenient for me to ask questions.Besides,they thought it would make it was possible for me to make good use of my night time ,and that I could also learn the ability to take after myself.
However,I have own idea .Staying at home in the evening ,I will have more time to work at their lessons.At the same time,I can learn what I am not good at it.With a good learning environment ,personally I think I can learn all my subject much better.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advices
Yours,
Andy
Dear editor,I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term的短文改错!Dear editor,I am a senior 1 student.In the beginning of this term,my parents or teachers asked me to live in the school dormitory .They said it would be very convenient
更正在括号处注明!
Dear editor,
I am a senior 1 student.(At) the beginning of this term,my parents (and) teachers asked me to live in the school dormitory .They said it would be very convenient for me to ask questions.Besides,they thought it would make it (去掉was) possible for me to make good use of my night time,and that I could also learn the ability to (look) after myself.
However,I have (加入my) own idea.Staying at home in the evening,I will have more time to work at (my) lessons.At the same time,I can learn what I am not good at (去掉it).With a good learning environment,personally I think I can learn all my (subjects) much better.
I would be grateful if you could give me some (advice)!
Yours,Andy
第一行,把or改成and
第三行,把was去掉
第四行,把take改为look
第五行,own前加my
第六行,their改成my,把it去掉
第七行,subject加s.
最后一行,advices把s去掉。